| Q. What do you
write? What publisher(s) do you write or have you written for?
Elizabeth Boyle:
I write historical
romance, set primarily in England during the Regency period. My
motto when I tell a story is: Adventure, Passion, Romance.
And not necessarily in that order.
Q: Tell us a bit about your upcoming/current release(s).
EB: My new
book, IT TAKES A HERO, is the final book in my Danvers series.
This is the story of the youngest, rather misfit Danvers
brother, Raphael. He’s come back from the war, finds he has no
real active place in English society, refuses to take charity
from his brothers and relations, so he starts taking clients who
need “problems” solved. He’s a rather upscale Bow Street
runner. The story revolves around a series of murders and a
novelist who is writing some rather scandalous stories. Before
he knows it, Rafe is tangling with the very wily Rebecca Tate,
and in an instant, he finds he’s met his match.
This isn’t the last of my Danvers books though—I have a novella
coming out sometime in 2005 featuring one of the reoccurring
characters from these books, Jemmy Reyburn. He’s featured in
ONCE TEMPTED and IT TAKES A HERO, and I just couldn’t leave the
series behind without telling his story. This novella, The
Matchmaker’s Bargain, will be included with stories by Christina
Dodd and Stephanie Laurens, two of my favorite writers, so I am
very excited about that project.
And finally, I am finishing up another book, SOMETHING ABOUT
EMMALINE, which is about a baron who makes up a wife to keep all
the marriage minded mothers in London off his back, only to
arrive home a few years later to find Emmaline happily ensconced
in his home masquerading as his wife. The story is a rather
madcap romp of how he tries to get rid of her, then much to his
dismay, falls in love with her and has to find a way to keep
her.
After that, I am looking at starting another historical series,
a spin off from SOMETHING ABOUT EMMALINE, but I’m still in the
mulling stages of that idea.
Q: What year did you get "The Call"?
EB: I never
really got the traditional “call.” I sold my first book via a
publishing contest, the Dell Diamond Debut. So first off I
received a letter that I was a finalist, and then had to submit
the completed manuscript, then wait for four months until the
winner was announced at a luncheon at RWA in July of 1996. So I
had to sit politely through a luncheon before I discovered the
winner. Long process, but it was wonderful to share my “call”
in front of 1200 other writers. The entire story of how I had
to finish the book in six weeks and get it to New York at the
final hour is on
my
website..
Q: How many years had you written before you got "The
Call"?
EB: I had been writing
seriously for about five years.
Q: Describe your first sale experience.
EB: After I
won the contract, then I discovered that you have to keep
writing and write to someone else’s schedule. My advice is to
become very disciplined before you sell, and learn to write even
when all you want to do is celebrate your newfound success.
Q: Is there anything you wish you had known/done before
you made that first sale or subsequent sales?
EB:
Probably learn more of the business side of writing, but even
now, after eight years, I am still trying to learn all the
intricacies of the publishing world. Overall, having been a
member of RWA for those five years had truly prepared me for
many of the changes that came about after I sold my book.
Q: What is the best piece of craft advice you can give an
aspiring author?
EB: Learn
how to revise and polish your work before you submit it. So
many unpublished authors lose first sales because they don’t
take the time to truly polish their book and make it their best
work possible. Editing is not the job of the editor—it is your
job.
You need to look to see that the characterizations are
consistent throughout the book, that your motivations and
conflict are believable and compelling, that your romance moves
in a logical course of action, that you’ve taken every
opportunity to use sexual tension efficiently—whether you are
writing sweet or hot. Make sure those hooks are fantastic, not
just at the end of the high moments, but at the end of every
chapter, every scene. That your dialogue rings with
authenticity. Don’t be afraid to cut what doesn’t work, what
doesn’t add to at least two or three of the elements above.
This may all sound rather clinical, but sometimes the finishing
work is more important than that initial draft.
I go through every
single one of my books completely and thoroughly 4-5 times
before I send it to my editor. I cut ruthlessly; I’ll search
for just the right word for an hour sometimes. The hardest
part, is that often it isn’t until the 2nd or 3rd
run through that I really find the depth of my characters, get
to the heart of their internal conflict. Most of my books, on
the first draft look like Swiss Cheese they have so many holes,
but I know from experience and faith that I will be able to plug
all of those holes up, maybe not on the first run through, not
even on the 2nd, but if I trust the story, it will
come together after several run thrus. So my advice: Polish,
polish polish.
Q: What is the best piece of industry advice can you give
an aspiring author?
EB: If you
want to be a success in this business learn what is marketable.
So many writers are disappointed that their extraordinary story
is not appreciated. If you want to be a success in this
business you have to write what is compelling to the
marketplace. That doesn’t make you a slave to the trends, but
use the trends and add your own twist to them. My first
published novel was set primarily in France during the
Revolution. Now any editor would tell you that the French
Revolution is a no-sale, but I did it because I understood what
would make it compelling: I started the story in England, gave
a great opening to my characters, until they were off and
running and then took them to France. The editor said that by
the time I had her on the boat across the Channel, she didn’t
care, she was in love with the story.
As a side note, if you look at the publicity for that book,
there is NEVER any mention of the French Revolution, again never
emphasize the more unmarketable parts of the story, but rely on
the elements that make the story saleable to the publisher and
the readers.
If you get what is
marketable and use those elements, you will be very successful
in this industry, while at the same time being able to explore
your own unique voice.
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